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 Aug 7 2008, 10:23 AM
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Newbie  Group: Members Posts: 13 Joined: 5-August 08 Member No.: 52,528  |
This is one of my first layouts (well the design, it's not coded).
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Aug 7 2008, 02:25 PM
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Outrageously Uber Ninja  Group: Community Helper Posts: 2,198 Joined: 2-March 08 From: Australia Member No.: 12,578 |
its actually good. the typography could use some work though.
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Aug 7 2008, 06:47 PM
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 Hosting Abuse Staff Group: Moderators Posts: 2,933 Joined: 14-February 08 From: Fort Myers FL, USA Member No.: 10,089 |
I really like it but my opinion might be a little biased since I love lime green so much.
I really like the two line navigation too. I think the only thing your missing is a footer area. |
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Aug 10 2008, 07:45 PM
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 PHP Programmer Group: Members Posts: 895 Joined: 9-March 08 From: Naples, FL Member No.: 13,296 |
I think it looks really nice.
I do like the typogrophy in all and I also love the two-line menu thing. The one thing I would change is have the top of the green box on the right side even with the top of the main text on the left side. Right now you have the two texts aligned, but it looks odd to me so I would probably rather have the top of the box aligned witth the top of the main text. And then above both put some kind of very subtle line across, centered between the three little boxes and the main content. Just subtle enough to notice but not like a bright lime green that's going to stick out like a sore thumb. |
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Aug 11 2008, 12:56 AM
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Outrageously Uber Ninja Group: Community Helper Posts: 2,198 Joined: 2-March 08 From: Australia Member No.: 12,578 |
 jetteh has disagreed with me again! but actually, i meant to say that i think the logo writing could use some work.
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Aug 11 2008, 12:59 AM
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PHP Programmer Group: Members Posts: 895 Joined: 9-March 08 From: Naples, FL Member No.: 13,296 |
 Nothing against you buddy, just my opinion 
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Aug 11 2008, 07:21 PM
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 Ninja Group: Members Posts: 209 Joined: 13-July 08 From: Yorkshire, England Member No.: 45,804 |
QUOTE(Jetteh22 @ Aug 10 2008, 07:45 PM)  I think it looks really nice. I do like the typogrophy in all and I also love the two-line menu thing. The one thing I would change is have the top of the green box on the right side even with the top of the main text on the left side. Right now you have the two texts aligned, but it looks odd to me so I would probably rather have the top of the box aligned witth the top of the main text. And then above both put some kind of very subtle line across, centered between the three little boxes and the main content. Just subtle enough to notice but not like a bright lime green that's going to stick out like a sore thumb. I like it as it is, providing there is an easy way to change the colour. Green is not my thing, blue or red would look nice. |
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