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 Jun 12 2008, 01:00 AM
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 Super Ninja  Group: Members Posts: 313 Joined: 12-December 07 From: Glendale CA Member No.: 4,714  |
Well, I finished this around yesterday, Still somethings to add, but, You get the jist of it.
http://paradoxtoday.uni.cc getting a .com soon, constructive criticisim please, just dont be an asshole  (the coding is a tad sloppy since its my layout and im the only one that uses it, I usualy dont code like a neanderthal.) Edit: The validation is gona go down tonight, i just wanted to put content there to see what it would look like nevermind it XD
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Jun 12 2008, 01:15 AM
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 Super Ninja Group: Members Posts: 385 Joined: 2-December 07 From: Missoula, Montana Member No.: 3,909 |
I like the dark theme, but I don't like the header colorization...the purple meshes and blends in with your links. Change the header color to maybe I light green from your layout image. Other than that - I like it!
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Jun 12 2008, 02:30 AM
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Super Ninja Group: Members Posts: 313 Joined: 12-December 07 From: Glendale CA Member No.: 4,714 |
Wait, I dont understand what u mean by the "header color to maybe I light green from your layoutimage."
but thanks
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Jun 12 2008, 02:40 AM
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Super Ninja Group: Members Posts: 385 Joined: 2-December 07 From: Missoula, Montana Member No.: 3,909 |
Hah,
I meant to say, "Change the header color to maybe the light green from your layout image" |
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Jun 12 2008, 02:42 AM
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Super Ninja Group: Members Posts: 313 Joined: 12-December 07 From: Glendale CA Member No.: 4,714 |
oh...... That's what you ment.
Thanks for your opinion ill take that into consideration (its a great idea)
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Jun 12 2008, 04:38 AM
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 Member Group: Members Posts: 85 Joined: 5-June 08 From: Singapore Member No.: 33,338 |
The site doesnt display for me, is it down?
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Jun 12 2008, 05:40 AM
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 Outrageously Uber Ninja Group: Moderators Posts: 1,102 Joined: 2-June 07 From: United States Member No.: 14 |
This is actually pretty nice. I basically like what you have done with the header except for the font. I do not think the style of your header type matches with the more minimalistic sans-serif fonts you have used elsewhere in the layout. The content is also styled nicely. I would add some more padding in certain areas and maybe tweak a few other little things. Overall though it is nicely done.
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Jun 12 2008, 05:56 AM
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Super Ninja Group: Members Posts: 313 Joined: 12-December 07 From: Glendale CA Member No.: 4,714 |
Chris, What in mind would you tweak? And what fond do you suggest I use in the header?
also, Where would you add the padding edit: No, The site isnt down try agian
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Jun 12 2008, 07:11 AM
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 Super Duper Ninja Group: Members Posts: 423 Joined: 24-February 08 Member No.: 11,718 |
hm, i like the simplicity of it. Good flowing colors in the header. maybe add a space between the avaiable for hire on top and the top of the page. Its too high up.
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Jun 12 2008, 08:20 AM
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 Outrageously Uber Ninja Group: Moderators Posts: 5,140 Joined: 11-May 08 From: Australia Member No.: 25,876 |
I think it all looks rather good. Header needs to be less meshed though.
Jacob. |
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Jun 12 2008, 01:54 PM
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Outrageously Uber Ninja  Group: Community Helper Posts: 2,198 Joined: 2-March 08 From: Australia Member No.: 12,578 |
looks good, but i think the header could use some colorization tweaks.
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Jun 12 2008, 03:50 PM
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 Outrageously Uber Ninja Group: Members Posts: 1,196 Joined: 19-September 07 Member No.: 234 |
Its pretty simple and nice looking, colors are greatly used, i would add some space for the layout
Looks really nice and simple. |
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Jun 12 2008, 10:28 PM
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 PHP Programmer Group: Members Posts: 895 Joined: 9-March 08 From: Naples, FL Member No.: 13,296 |
Not workin for me either Paradocks
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Jun 12 2008, 11:34 PM
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Super Ninja Group: Members Posts: 313 Joined: 12-December 07 From: Glendale CA Member No.: 4,714 |
Thanks for the replys, but what colors should i meshinto the header, and Creactive, the link works O.o
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Jun 13 2008, 02:26 AM
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Outrageously Uber Ninja Group: Moderators Posts: 1,102 Joined: 2-June 07 From: United States Member No.: 14 |
QUOTE(Paradoks @ Jun 12 2008, 01:56 AM)  Chris, What in mind would you tweak? And what fond do you suggest I use in the header? also, Where would you add the padding edit: No, The site isnt down try agianWell as far as tweak just add a little more space in between the welcome text and the actual content. For the header I guess it is just preference, the font you have really isn't that bad. I would probably just done something like a thinner Helvetica or something like this:  Just have fun with it. 
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Jun 13 2008, 03:23 AM
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Member Group: Members Posts: 85 Joined: 5-June 08 From: Singapore Member No.: 33,338 |
hmmm looks quite okay, but I feel that the layout as a whole is too darkish~
and from my screen, I cant really see the purple fonts from the black bg.
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Jun 13 2008, 03:40 AM
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Super Ninja Group: Members Posts: 313 Joined: 12-December 07 From: Glendale CA Member No.: 4,714 |
Wow Chris how did you do that, thats freakin amazing >.< Makes me wanna use it but its not my work :'(
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Jun 13 2008, 03:50 AM
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Outrageously Uber Ninja Group: Moderators Posts: 1,102 Joined: 2-June 07 From: United States Member No.: 14 |
QUOTE(Paradoks @ Jun 12 2008, 11:40 PM) Wow Chris how did you do that, thats freakin amazing >.< Makes me wanna use it but its not my work :'( If you want to use it, please feel free to do so. I basically just used Helvetica35-Thin which can be found here somewhere (http://www.mattyann.com/echange/HELVETICA/). Well anyhow I just used the Overlay layer style on the text and drew a few stroked paths with the pen tool. |
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Jun 13 2008, 04:12 AM
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Super Ninja Group: Members Posts: 313 Joined: 12-December 07 From: Glendale CA Member No.: 4,714 |
How did you remove my previous text?
Umm, If i where to use yours I would have to change/modify some stuff to it i guess butthanks for the idea
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Jun 13 2008, 04:13 AM
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Newbie Group: Members Posts: 15 Joined: 12-June 08 Member No.: 35,416 |
Nice! I like its simplicity, but the header and banner at the top of the page don't work for me. I like the colors, but your title should pop more. Hmm, maybe you can just make the words white, like your content text. Also, the footer doesn't look that great (for me, anyways). I'm thinking that you should keep the galaxy theme of your page and make the same pattern for the footer.
Hope I don't sound like a butthole.Anyways, good job! Hope to see more good work. |
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