Xylene
Jul 10 2008, 11:35 AM
Hello, Im very to new to web design/coding and I made this design in PS.
I've got no use for it. It is my first one i've ever made.
Its not awsome but I think its good for my first one.
I was wondering wat a peice like this would be worth? if anything
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http://img91.imageshack.us/img91/4160/pagecopyel6.jpg
NaRzY
Jul 10 2008, 12:23 PM
Nothing. It is worth nothing. It doesn't really have anything to do with websites on there. It looks more like a flyer/brochure.
Jacob.
fenerli
Jul 10 2008, 12:51 PM
You should never ask for a price for a first layout as it will be hard to get constructive criticism. No, it is not worth anything, but don't take it the wrong way, note that everyone starts small and the output clearly shows that it's done by a beginner.
Xylene
Jul 10 2008, 05:34 PM
kk thanks i noticed i didn't do that good now that am actualy awake lol
MrTouz
Jul 10 2008, 06:13 PM
lol, try to stay out of the glossy look on your elements, they all have a certain amount of glow and that makes its... 1995... try also to put more stuff into it, i mean... 2 nav buttons, 2 colors, 2 products, 1 logo 1 slogan :/ no text, no footer.
Everything is kind of BIG, it should be smaller, also your product images should be at the same size, the tet for the TV.. unreadable... :/
Like said above, its worth nothing, but one day... your designs will be, so i guess.. keep practicing, and try to copy other sites to start...try to reproduce what has been done already, also follow tutorials.. and than bing bang bong ! You'll be able to make your very own cool layout.
Luke
Jul 11 2008, 02:58 AM
This is kinda the same concept as one of my designs... b4 deals

(FOR SALE! =D)... As MrTouz said, add more content. You should look at some sites online and see what the differences are. Find some good techniques and use em. Honestly, I don't like that design at all. Not diggin the colors... the content positioning... the buttons... theres no footer... I don't really like the drop shadow or the outer/inner glows. I think the biggest problem is that it doesn't look like a website! It's not bad for a very first design but you just need to make it look more "real". Good luck!