Crown
Jul 12 2008, 05:43 PM
I has been working on this template hopeing to make it really good but im not sure, so i need your point of views :]

Davey90r
Jul 12 2008, 05:46 PM
The "in design" logo is slightly too big.
Crown
Jul 12 2008, 05:53 PM
QUOTE(Davey90r @ Jul 12 2008, 06:46 PM)

The "in design" logo is slightly too big.
This better
Luke
Jul 12 2008, 06:09 PM
Still a lil wide for meh screen

But lookin good.
It's not completely finished... it needs something. Try messin around... give it a more artistic touch, see what it looks like. I'm not sure what it needs but if I think o somethin, i'll tell ya!

Good luck!
Luke
IamShipon1988
Jul 12 2008, 06:14 PM
The layout itself is fairly nice and clean, however the area where you placed "buy me coffee" makes that header portion a bit incomplete. If you want to put something there, I would like to see something on the right side as well.
Crown
Jul 12 2008, 06:17 PM
QUOTE(IamShipon1988 @ Jul 12 2008, 07:14 PM)

The layout itself is fairly nice and clean, however the area where you placed "buy me coffee" makes that header portion a bit incomplete. If you want to put something there, I would like to see something on the right side as well.
What am i gona put their ? :S
Banjo
Jul 12 2008, 09:38 PM
Looks good, i like the colours.
Trippin7464
Jul 12 2008, 09:50 PM
Where the tutorial buttons start that space between the content and the buttons is too small, looks odd
And for something on the right side next to your name, put your logo or a logo of some sort
Tom
Jul 12 2008, 10:04 PM
Nice. But I reckon the layout itself needs a colour scheme and the logo could do with some touching up - maybe an actual logo icon--and the current font looks squashed.
Crown
Jul 12 2008, 10:07 PM
QUOTE(Tom @ Jul 12 2008, 11:04 PM)

Nice. But I reckon the layout itself needs a colour scheme and the logo could do with some touching up - maybe an actual logo icon--and the current font looks squashed.
you has gaving me ideas, i will rape them up asap, but for now i need to sleep
Cmain
Jul 12 2008, 10:30 PM
Looking good. I think a nice touch to it would be an icon logo as Tom said. Other than that looks great.
Bogey
Jul 13 2008, 03:46 AM
It looks unfinished maybe because its a tad bit too clean
Crown
Jul 13 2008, 09:31 AM
Ok before you all say it, yes i cant make logos lol

Need help with a decent logo

@Dave hows the right hand side now
fenerli
Jul 13 2008, 09:50 AM
I like the header, everything below is a bit too boring and boxy. Arial font and the simplistic logos for those Adobe products also contribute.
NaRzY
Jul 13 2008, 11:49 AM
The design looks excellent Brandon. What is this site going to be for? Is it just a design or is it going to be used for something?
Jacob.
Crown
Jul 13 2008, 12:19 PM
QUOTE(NaRzY @ Jul 13 2008, 12:49 PM)

The design looks excellent Brandon. What is this site going to be for? Is it just a design or is it going to be used for something?
Jacob.
I cant code so just a design lol.
NaRzY
Jul 13 2008, 12:26 PM
Haha. If you want to use it send me the PSD and I will code it for you. Lol.
Jacob.
Crown
Jul 13 2008, 12:40 PM
Better >>>
Crown
Jul 13 2008, 01:17 PM
I kinda did a Dark Pink one aswell
machine
Jul 13 2008, 01:22 PM
Nice.
You could go for a more-rounded typeface to go with those rectangles with rounded corners. And those logo/boxes can be 'jazzed up'

using something that is unmistakably associated with each application [see below].
Idea A:

This uses the Photoshop icon instead of the 'PS' text.
Idea B:

This uses the icon and a faded screenshot of the About box image from Photoshop.
All the best

And that's the most informative dummy text I've seen in a while

...
Crown
Jul 13 2008, 01:39 PM
QUOTE(machine @ Jul 13 2008, 02:22 PM)

Nice.
You could go for a more-rounded typeface to go with those rectangles with rounded corners. And those logo/boxes can be 'jazzed up'

using something that is unmistakably associated with each application [see below].
Idea A:

This uses the Photoshop icon instead of the 'PS' text.
Idea B:

This uses the icon and a faded screenshot of the About box image from Photoshop.
All the best

And that's the most informative dummy text I've seen in a while

...
Thanks, but im not to keen on the rounded typeface for a template like this, i normaly do rounded ones & what do you mean by "And that's the most informative dummy text I've seen in a while

..." lol ?
Luke
Jul 13 2008, 01:41 PM
I actually i like the photoshop icons better. They're simple and clean... I'm not sure about the round corners. I usually test it out to see which looks better. machine - never been to lipsum.com???
Crown
Jul 13 2008, 01:44 PM
QUOTE(Luke @ Jul 13 2008, 02:41 PM)

I actually i like the photoshop icons better. They're simple and clean... I'm not sure about the round corners. I usually test it out to see which looks better. machine - never been to lipsum.com???

I don't like the icons as they look old =[
Luke
Jul 13 2008, 01:45 PM
The one's that you have? I meant yours... sorry bad at explaining what I mean
Crown
Jul 13 2008, 01:46 PM
QUOTE(Luke @ Jul 13 2008, 02:45 PM)

The one's that you have? I meant yours... sorry bad at explaining what I mean

Oh lol
anyways this Purple looks nice
machine
Jul 13 2008, 01:51 PM
@ crown: I meant that whole history of the usual 'lorem ipsum' thing you have there on that template

. I knew it was Latin and must've been adopted from the days of printing presses, but never bothered to find out its history

...
And yes, the PS icon is old; it's from the PS I personally use -- which is from its pre-CS days...
[shocked] No rounded corner? [/shocked!] Isn't that the hot Web 2.0 thing to do these days?
@ Luke: No mate, haven't checked it out. But will check it out now. Thanks for the link
Luke
Jul 13 2008, 01:58 PM
hey! not bad... try some other colors. Go for a slightly dark bluish color

- #206193 ?
machine - that's where he got the history and shit! A whole website dedicated to dummy text!
Trippin7464
Jul 13 2008, 04:04 PM
As much as I hate to ruin this, I don't like the "Thank your for the coffee donation". And if NaRzY is busy I could code it too.
Crown
Jul 13 2008, 05:52 PM
QUOTE(Trippin7464 @ Jul 13 2008, 05:04 PM)

As much as I hate to ruin this, I don't like the "Thank your for the coffee donation". And if NaRzY is busy I could code it too.
Yeh you pretty much ruined it =[ i duno what to put there =[
Luke
Jul 13 2008, 06:33 PM
You can put a Registration link there... "Join Now | Login" something
Crown
Jul 13 2008, 06:35 PM
I will do now, atm im wroking on a differnt version of the template
Crown
Jul 13 2008, 06:56 PM
Ok i failed
Luke
Jul 13 2008, 06:58 PM
I like it! Put in a bunch of dummy tuts to see what it looks like.
Davey90r
Jul 15 2008, 08:11 PM
All looking good it would just annoy me incredably if that was a live site due to the lack of precise spacing with the content boxes and logos! Use a ruler :P
Crown
Jul 17 2008, 01:44 PM
Lol yeh i noticed its all over the place XD
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