please give me feed back on the head guy.

Its Attched

the text doesnt work, and maybe drop more shadows to make it look cleaner.

Black text is just sample text . real design has better font.

well lets see it

That grunge font is so bad and overused it makes me sick.

Work on it more

I agree with Cmain. Grunge is so over-worked.

Jacob.

its not so bad.. looks great actually but you can work on it more...

Looks good...

Grunge is a bit "over-used".
but if your a good designer you can come up with something incorporating grunge.
My advice is add some vector shapes or curvy lines coming of the texts background.

Japansie