was playin with gradients on the text and curves on the image



PD* is my name on gfxbb where hendo is from.

cnc

it looks really good - i think there's a bit too much black though..

black is good

thanks for cnc

Uhm, I'm not sure why you made this. It doesn't really convey any information... or look very good

its alright. it looks very simple, but did u mean to cover the PD* on the siggie?

I agree. Focal is a bit weird too.

hummmmmz
@Magnus thanks for your cnc i guess but its a style that you may think is easy but its hard to get right.
@Cmain also thanks but the vocal point is the text mainly on this, thats how i wanted it to be.
@L. Kaiserblazer yes i was ment to cover up the PD* because it adds a whole new layer to the look of it as if the text is behind her.

thanks for cnc i guess

I don't like it at all, there really isn't any thing that grabs my attention. And honestly the first thing my eyes go to on this is the lamp, so maybe you should have put your text there or made it more of a point to draw the eyes to the PD on the sig.

I agree with everyone's comments on here, the sig doesn't have a good focal (not vocal as you said, sigs don't talk) point, it's way too black, and to me it just looks like you took a photo and darkened most of it and added PD, sure sometimes that works, but in your case I don't think you did a very good job.

Hard to get right? Don't kid yourself. You just desaturated then upped the contrast on a stock picture and added some cheap coloring and some obscured text

looks decent. not very appealing though.

If your going to do that isolated colour effect, only do it in one place and make it stand out and be appealing.

Jacob.

i really like red on black... nice job!
the red lipstick really works...