Here is a new layout i made. Please give your true, and maybe harsh, comments.. i am trying to make this layout as best as it can be, so any critic will be greatly appreciated..



-Lucas

I really like the header minus the gold bar w/ the text on it (I would suggest making it a different color, it just doesnt seem right to me).

The Menu looks pretty nice, but I would not put the "......." next to it, just take them out on both sides.

Content area could use a little work. Not sure what you could do with it, but it just sems a little plain to me.

Good luck.

thanks jetteh.. i will add to the body...

i need more opinions.. not sure if i should code yet..

The word 'rhunic' (or is it 'Crhunic'?) collide with the scarab image and clock background image.

You are properbly still designing your navigation bar, so I can't comment on it yet.

Besides that, I think the design is awsome, layout is clean!

btw, what is the "theme" of this design? because I see following elements: gold, scarab, time, city and gears... I can't match a theme in my head o_O

I would keep the navigation and remove everything else. Sorry, but I do not like the header or body.

Jacob.

I think you should get rid of the bevel

I don't really like pretty much anything, but the clock and the city. The gears don't fit there, that gold bars dont look that good and the content is quite empty

The clock design is good (you made it?), but your fonts, they really need improvements, all of them. You should also remove the gear patterns imo.
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yes.. the clock design is drawn by me through adobe photoshop...

cool design... if you can make buttons for the links..it would be better..

I would remove the lines between the links in your navigation bar, and get a better font. Everything else is amazing, especially the clock , I can-t believe you drew it yourself. Nice work


You shouldn-t have taken out the binary code inside the city-s image from the actual page, it looks cool.

yeah Wejmaster is right.. i think it would be better if you leave it plain and without the lines...