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vampirelovr
Hello I have recently uploaded my index.html file to zymic and would like some feedback on it. please ignore the links in the navagation panel as I have not uploaded them yet and I would like to just finish the index page. also i am working on the welcome message so please don't worry about that either.

thank-you in advanced for your feed back!

The site is supposed to be gothic well more vampirey though so ya.

the Site is http://vlandteam.vndv.com/

Also made a hosting website. Please give feed back as well.

The Hosting Site is http://vlandteam.runhosting.com/

just a quick question.

can I link to more than 1 external css file per page? (like for index.html I want to link to more than 1 external css file)
k.digennaro
Well you really don't have much done, the header area is way to large, make it like 50-75 pixels high. I'm not sure about that striped thing your trying to do looks kinda tacky, maybe try a simple gradient like this one,

This is a simple 3 tone gradient, dark shade of red at 0 medium dark at 50 and lighter at 100.

Patterns need to be used in moderation, in my opinion you over did yours.

Good Luck,
Kevin DiGennaro

P.S. That gradient looks great with a charcoal black, but remember not to use to much, to much black or white can throw your layout off, make sure there's some balance.
vampirelovr
QUOTE(k.digennaro @ Dec 10 2008, 07:37 PM) *
Well you really don't have much done, the header area is way to large, make it like 50-75 pixels high. I'm not sure about that striped thing your trying to do looks kinda tacky, maybe try a simple gradient like this one,

This is a simple 3 tone gradient, dark shade of red at 0 medium dark at 50 and lighter at 100.

Patterns need to be used in moderation, in my opinion you over did yours.

Good Luck,
Kevin DiGennaro


thanks for the feed back. I new there was something about the stripes that didn't fit my theme. and may i say great job on ur site.
vampirelovr
Updated index.html at 8:05 -5 GMT
Andrew
Link is dead for me.
vampirelovr
QUOTE(Trippin7464 @ Dec 11 2008, 02:25 PM) *
Link is dead for me.


wasn't the server down?
k.digennaro
Man, still need to get rid of those stripes, it will look a lot better wink.gif

Kevin
vampirelovr
QUOTE(k.digennaro @ Dec 13 2008, 09:36 AM) *
Man, still need to get rid of those stripes, it will look a lot better wink.gif

Kevin


Working on that right now actually. Just creating better images right now for it. should be done around 3:00 pm -5:00 gmt
vampirelovr
QUOTE(vampirelovr @ Dec 13 2008, 01:56 PM) *
Working on that right now actually. Just creating better images right now for it. should be done around 3:00 pm -5:00 gmt


I won't be able to put them up today (maybe i can not sure). I will be able to put them up tomorrow though.
Jenie
cant see the link...
vampirelovr
QUOTE(Jenie @ Dec 16 2008, 06:51 AM) *
cant see the link...


well it is there so your computer might not allow links from this site to be displayed. please check again but the link in text is below.



vlandteam.vndv.com

and for my hosting site

vlandteam.runhosting.com
vampirelovr
Hello. I am working on a complete new template and once I am done I will update the main post to let every one know.

Paradoks
you over did the stripes there buddy. but yeah. good thing your working on a new one :] 10$ templates i sell <3 =]
vampirelovr
QUOTE(Paradoks @ Dec 17 2008, 06:56 PM) *
you over did the stripes there buddy. but yeah. good thing your working on a new one :] 10$ templates i sell <3 =]


yah i never did like the stripes but my cousin who has a degree in web developing said it would be the best thing to do so I tried it. but he was wrong.
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