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Template №1 http://i041.radikal.ru/0711/87/75e8175e1a0c.png
Template №2 http://i002.radikal.ru/0711/4c/d5e9c1d79d0d.png

Without comments to not leave

looks good. very much better than my first designs.

Those are very nice designs. A++ for you

Thanks!

First one is good.. But i'm not sure about the second one.. theres like 20 different colours going on.

I also think that a solid background would make Template 2 look far better.

Good job on both templates though.


also check this site out for colours: http://www.colourlovers.com

not bad..... good for first ones....

can you pst the templates in a zip file please

I don't think hes giving them away, lol

I like those templates

All thanks for active responsiveness and advice, me it is important. And thanks for site ColourLovers, a good site.

Download
First http://excaliburg.deviantart.com/art/Excal...mplate-70810456
Second http://excaliburg.deviantart.com/art/exSty...mplate-70811350

Sorry for my bad english

Look pretty good for your first.

Ohh thanks for the downloads

Thats insane! I love you and your work. Great job, I'm favoriting you on deviantart!

If this is your first template, I dont think its your first time with photoshop?

Good job for your "first templates "

Two years. But I seldom come.

Two one o'clock in the morning, it is not slept. Has opened a photoshop to kill time and has created 3-rd pattern or something in this sort...

Screenshot http://i033.radikal.ru/0711/e9/e814ac0e80ba.png

this one i like the best.....

looks familiar in some way.... nice job though

EDIT: I think the background in familiar where do you guys get thoughs stripey bg's though? or do you custom make them?

They are great templates,wish i could do the same.

Striped backgrounds are easy... just define a pattern with slanted lines

Defiantly nice templates for a first attempt (without sounding patronizing!)

The first one http://i041.radikal.ru/0711/87/75e8175e1a0c.png is good but I think you should tone down the pixel stripes/scanlines a bit because the top left menu/text is a tad hard to read. The second one is also not bad but it lacks structure and as others had said the colours are a bit random.

By the way, at me the monitor ancient, at me it blacked out, white as easy grey. Therefore at you it more lightish, at me more darkish...

Sheep Donkey, read xire post (#20)

And all once again thanks

UPDATE:
Has slightly edited, has added the panel of authorization. Share it is possible with dA
http://excaliburg.deviantart.com/art/Darkened-70873463

this is one of my first web design... made it for my own business about computers.

Nice templates for sure!

My new template
http://excaliburg.deviantart.com/art/Light...e-Blog-73514157

is very good for be ur first template nice job

comments ^^ http://excaliburg.deviantart.com/art/Koxbox-84898735

they look good. you should try a different background pattern now. (not that the stripes are bad, but they will help you expand)

thank you note. ^^

If those were in english
and they could be sold to me, and me only,
I would buy the 2nd one. it's nice.

Or if your lazy just use this site, http://www.stripegenerator.com/
There are others like that just don't remember them