Hi Bryan Parker,
Wow that's a long page (surprising enough though -
it flows),
I like the simplistic playful value of it. If I were to make any changes I'd most likely shorten the "About the Creator" to a quick statement and then allow for a "
more ..." URL Link to the/a "Creators page". Additionally I'd take the "Here's what you get" information and give it a "A few highlights of program expectations" and show maybe 2 hard-core highlights and 1 medium-core highlight and a entertaining (
attractor - what is that? point for mom to excite the child into ettiquette) core point then give a "I want to see more of the programs benefits" URL Link to a complete "what you get" page with the ordering information.
That's a couple of ideas, I'm sure we could all put more into it but. . . a few steps at a time.