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Bryan Parker
Hi friends,

There is a good demand of etiquette and manner classes for children. Etiquettemoms.com has served many clients successfully.Many of whom have gone ahead to become established etiquette trainers, offering children’s etiquette classes and earning a steady amount of income for themselves.
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Hi Bryan Parker,
Wow that's a long page (surprising enough though - it flows), I like the simplistic playful value of it. If I were to make any changes I'd most likely shorten the "About the Creator" to a quick statement and then allow for a "more ..." URL Link to the/a "Creators page". Additionally I'd take the "Here's what you get" information and give it a "A few highlights of program expectations" and show maybe 2 hard-core highlights and 1 medium-core highlight and a entertaining (attractor - what is that? point for mom to excite the child into ettiquette) core point then give a "I want to see more of the programs benefits" URL Link to a complete "what you get" page with the ordering information.

That's a couple of ideas, I'm sure we could all put more into it but. . . a few steps at a time.

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