Gibbons
Dec 24 2007, 07:22 PM
What do you think of my latest website creation?
The website isn't actually live yet as I await the content from the client. "Text and photographs still to come."
The client asked for a basic, girly looking website that maintained an essence of professionalism.
Please do test out the pages and the contact form and if you find any problems please do let me know.
Here is a small preview:


Splash here:
Click Me (Inactive at present)
Main Pages:
Click Me
Drake14
Dec 24 2007, 07:27 PM
Looks like you've basically accomplished your task. it's girly, and decently professional.
iamandy
Dec 26 2007, 01:13 AM
sorry, but i thought that lipstick was a dildo, hahahah
Nexus
Dec 26 2007, 01:40 AM
Yes, but you've a dirty mind on you lol. It's actually really good. Though I could see an improvement in the "Treatments" and "Prices" pages. Basically, doing too many options will stretch the page out past that lipstick image, which will make it look extremely bad. And it would (in my own personal opinion) good to make the links look like they do something (like make them underline when hovered over, prehaps, that's all it takes).
That's my opinion though, I've always found it helps to make links look like they do something so that viewers know something is happening.
IamShipon1988
Dec 28 2007, 12:41 AM
Is there anyway for you to upload a live preview? I can't really criticize much based on thumbnail pics.
Thanks
Jack
Dec 28 2007, 01:41 AM
The white text boxes would look better with a pink border and a background a tad lighter than the body's background.
EMOruffino
Dec 28 2007, 02:18 AM
QUOTE(iamandy @ Dec 25 2007, 07:13 PM)

sorry, but i thought that lipstick was a dildo, hahahah
i have to agree with andy on this one...
not bad site btw.... black and pink
Gibbons
Dec 28 2007, 01:12 PM
QUOTE(IamShipon1988 @ Dec 28 2007, 12:41 AM)

Is there anyway for you to upload a live preview? I can't really criticize much based on thumbnail pics.
Thanks
Splash here:
Click Me (Inactive at present)
Main Pages:
Click MeNexus im going to make the last part of the treatments and prices switch with each other so that the information isn't pushed underneath.
At almost finished like, just waiting on the client feedback.
P3D1G0
Jan 3 2008, 10:16 PM
I noticed that the lipstick is (probably) going to be the enter button the website. I'm guessing? If so, you might want to make some kind of note on it that says enter, maybe make the enter like the name of the lipstick, I dunno. Just something small I noticed, make it easier with navigating.
Also like Jack says, with the contact form, add some CSS effects. Put a pink border on the input boxes, maybe make the background a dark gray but lighter then the background, etc. Other then that, great job I would have to say.
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