holy851020
Sep 17 2010, 08:37 AM
Ok, I have been working on my blog for about 2 months now and ready to hear everyones feedback, good or bad. Ready for it start getting ranked on the top page of Google.
Go ahead and tear me to pieces:
http://silverww.zxq.net/Thanks!
cindii
Sep 24 2010, 03:36 AM
It has interesting article and good photo on every topic. The next step you should do is to optimize it to increase page rank. Keep it up!
SemperFortisGuild
Oct 2 2010, 12:34 AM
So, you're ready to be torn to pieces, eh? Well, here's my review:
The template is nice, in fact, it's the same one I like to use for my blog too! What good taste you have... although there is just one problem here. I see a lot of default stuff left on there from when you installed WordPress. The favicon, Twitter link to WP, About page description, and "Just another WordPress site" slogan. These things could potentially be a turn-off for any would-be subscribers. The name of your blog, in particular, I find a bit confusing. Does Silverwing Wise have something to do with the health tips you're giving or is this a common username of yours? This is another reason why I would like an informative About page. If your Twitter widget is having errors, please remove it, and get rid of the blogroll (or the links on it) while you're at it. Those are completely irrelevant and unnecessary. Please capitalize all of your Categories if possible and leave no post "Uncategorized."
I take it that you're aiming for absolute professionalism, so that's why my last paragraph might have been a little harsh. But hey, that was all the bad stuff I had to tell you. Now, on the bright side, I find your site very informative, fantastically simple and easy to navigate, no ads to distract or annoy me, great tagging, and I see that your posts already have comments and trackbacks! When there are other users enjoying your site, it makes it much easier for me to join in and like it too. A definite plus is your share button. I can't tell you how many times I see websites that have the huge, cluttered, and just plain ugly groups of icons under every single post and notice.
Great website overall. If I were some random person looking for that kind of stuff, I would have your site bookmarked in a minute! Very good information and definitely love how it's all presented. Good luck on with your website! I'm just now rebuilding my WordPress site, so if you need any help with your blog don't hesitate to ask me.
Bharat
Oct 2 2010, 10:43 AM
Honestly speaking, im pretty sure i have seen the same template used before. The logo is downright ugly. The whole blog is merely passable. But, dont expect it to turn up within 3 pages of google search results for general terms. Im sorry for being rude. Also, SemperFortisGuild makes great points. Follow his advice
ashleyy
Oct 8 2010, 05:01 AM
Its a nice article and good pictures are used but i had seen it before.