just really want to show my page!
and hear some ideas and bad critic =)
http://fredrik.99k.org/

my second try on a page whit php..
it has a PHP include script(whit error page)
its in mostly norwegian!
but i bet you can understand the point, there are no specific subject on the page

?page=Fredrik
love that syntax in the link haha!
i made it! thanks to the guys on zymic

i really had no design so made something soo very simple, green stripes

PHP counter
PHP include set
PHP guestbook

and some javascript functions
dragable images,
animated TITLE intro (f5 if you missed)
home hotkey (h)

alot of my stuff is in "linker"
the most of which i have started on (never finish tho)
many old html projects


tell me what you think!
bad english
- Fredrik

The main problems I see are all the inconsistencies when using different browsers.
I only have Opera9, IE7, and Firefox2, so I'll just say the problems I found between those .
In Firefox, everything's left-aligned, but in other browsers such as IE and Opera, everything's centered.
FF: Linker only has 2 items. A lot of other content is missing Opera/IE: Linker has 12 items
Opera/IE: Bars overlap text often.
Firefox: <!-- at bottom of every page (This is probably where most of the problems are stemming from)

Your web site should appear the same and work correctly on all browsers - not just your favorite (and their appears to be a bug with your favorite on the web site, anyway :-P)

It probably just needs a bit of a code cleanup.

The style is kind of neat, but it's a bit boring. Add some images to spice things up!


The animated title is kinda neat at first, but I'd just do it for the index. It gets kind of annoying when you're loading various pages.

there had been some errors on zymic (at least for me)
and the problem about "<!--" tells me that you whathced the old update..
i updated it just befor the error accoured (then i removed the <!-- and such)
i also added a bunch of new links. much says that that was the old page before my little update


check again please. just in case

and the button overlapping i really dont understand, i can't see the problem in opera, iex og mozilla

my personal opinon :

To start there is to much green, its like everywhere, i mean everywhere and it kind of hurts the eye, its unplaisant and i can not stay on the site for more than 2 sec coz it really is to much.

There is not styling, you could try to add some css to your site so the texts looks a bit different and more organized.

Talking organization, i would sugest you create some specific areas, because it looks like everything is everywhere. i just can't follow what is what and where is where.

1/10

Not really feeling this one...

The layout is a bit 1996 and the green and black doesn't go great in this case. The organization is also poor.

too much green.. i feel dizzy reading your contents...

It feels a little
woah
makes me dizzy
maybe a little smoother..
but its pretty cool,with that thing up the top that keeps changing:P