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Paradoks
http://chat.lan.am/portfolio/index.php?

Its not the best. Although i dont know why there is a <--> Scroll bar at the bottom. Im trying to fix that problem. Currently im intergrating my selfmade CMS into the layout tongue.gif i got parts of it in there. but not the full thing.

Comment and rate 1/10 thank yoohs!:D
Jero2006
do you mean the scroll bar at the bottom of the browser ot site?
Paradoks
on the browser, and when u brose --->>> way there is a 10 PX of open space. im working on my CSS tofix that (its composed of Div tags) tongue.gif

on the browser, and when u brose --->>> way there is a 10 PX of open space. im working on my CSS tofix that (its composed of Div tags) tongue.gif
MrTouz
probably try using percentage so it fits all screens.. and you will not have to deal with many other codes.

For the site :

i like the header the style used for "paradox" and the little ?tornado?
i also like the main content area, you could try to make it a little bit larger (for your content box)

One think i do not like is your top navigation, i donno why i do not really like it. I think its because of the text. I suggest using images and css to animate it a little instead of using text. but its just an opinion.

6/10

(totally out of the subject : are you armenian ?)
Paradoks
Yes i am armenian wow! a person on the internet knows what armenian is!

Thanks for the review tongue.gif I am goign to add images. And im making plans to make the content area bigger tongue.gif
Paradoks
Bump****

Come on??? need more comments biggrin.gif
Cmain
It is alright. In my opinion the graffiti font doesn't fit the website at all and looks noobish. Also the navigation is too tall for what is in it and the pattern on it is odd. I would suggest going for a more streamlined logo and central header since it currently is a bit odd.
Andrew
Well I question that this is your layout at all... the css file says otherwise

QUOTE
/* CoolBlue designed and coded by Daniel St. Jules of Gamexe.net. (http://www.gamexe.net) */

/*--------------------------*/
/* GENERAL STYLES */
/*--------------------------*/

html,body { margin:0; padding:0; }

body {
color:#ea00ff;
font-size: 10pt;
font-family: Verdana;
background: #262626 url(image/bg.png) top repeat-x;
}

.............and so on and so on
Paradoks
I borrowed the CSS basic styles, the .php and everything else was by me. I only needed to borrow the

body{
background:
}

Because i was still learning to make a valid Html4.1 strict website
BTW: check out the cool blue template.. its a BLUE template on that site. if you want ill send you my psd of the layout i designed. if you promise to not re-use it sad.gif
Andrew
QUOTE(Paradoks @ Mar 7 2008, 01:19 AM) *
I borrowed the CSS basic styles, the .php and everything else was by me. I only needed to borrow the

body{
background:
}

Because i was still learning to make a valid Html4.1 strict website
BTW: check out the cool blue template.. its a BLUE template on that site. if you want ill send you my psd of the layout i designed. if you promise to not re-use it sad.gif

It's allright, I believe you now, You sound honest enough. I couldn't find the cool blue template but I really didn't look, but I did notice they had tutorials and stuff. Sorry for jumping to conclusions. Just alot of people steal and don't give credit. I do like the site, even if Purple isn't my color. I'd much prefer the site to be in green, but I do have to agree I don't like the FONT for the paradox header, but I like the little tornado thing, and I like the way everything is presented.
But the content area either needs to be centered and made larger, or add another side column, because there is a HUGE open space right in the center of the "News post" and the side bar.
Paradoks
yeah... i agree but the problem is im not that good at VALID html4.1 strict w. CSS and divs i really need some help and what not. maybe if you had aim you could help me out :-)
MrTouz
QUOTE
Yes i am armenian wow! a person on the internet knows what armenian is!


my name is Garo Krikorian (IAN) im armenian 2 tongue.gif yea kind of hard finding people that knows armenians tongue.gif
grumpy
nice;
i especially like the navigation on the right, it suits the layout
the text on the header looks odd; freehand fonts aren't usually used with that kind of background
A sans serif font would look better. or a pixel font. or both!
and the content box seems too narrow but maybe thats just me.
Andrew
QUOTE(Paradoks @ Mar 7 2008, 10:09 PM) *
yeah... i agree but the problem is im not that good at VALID html4.1 strict w. CSS and divs i really need some help and what not. maybe if you had aim you could help me out :-)

I do have aim, scroll all the way down on my member profile
Paradoks
Okay thanks! :-)
Slick
I love the colors used in the layout. The contrasting dark greys and purples.
I like the font, although there a few better graffiti-styled fonts but this one works well the layout.
My only real gripe with the layout is that the content area isn't really big. But I'm guessing that it has to do with the fact that is has barely any text in it.

The logo looks like it took a little bit of effort to make. Don't know if you used a tutorial or not, but it seems amazing to me.
Overall, I give this site a 7/10.

Good job.
Paradoks
QUOTE(Slick @ Mar 9 2008, 05:04 AM) *
I love the colors used in the layout. The contrasting dark greys and purples.
I like the font, although there a few better graffiti-styled fonts but this one works well the layout.
My only real gripe with the layout is that the content area isn't really big. But I'm guessing that it has to do with the fact that is has barely any text in it.

The logo looks like it took a little bit of effort to make. Don't know if you used a tutorial or not, but it seems amazing to me.
Overall, I give this site a 7/10.

Good job.


No it was realy quite easy to do. and thanks for your feed back tongue.gif

I took a striped pattern. Overlayed it with 60% optacity pver a dark gray bg and i made a new layer, made a selection, cut it in half, and made a white to transparent from the bottom up so the white is at the bottom and it fades toward the top. Then you add text under the white fade layer. tongue.gif

BTW: The site i made some minor CSS errors anywhays im uploading a new layout with 2 style options Green/grey and purple/grey the green/gray will be default. but you can always change it up a bit. As for the content. I will be adding more stuff. lets just say that site is in Alpha (thanks trippin) tongue.gif

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