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Banjo
Hi, iv just finished my first propper coded layout and i was wondering if you would mind writing some feedback about it like how i can improve it.

I may put a theme change on there later so you can change colours etc...

Anyway here is the Layout

Thanks

Edit: Updated link http://schoolrebel.zzl.org/update/index.html
uncled1023
hm... personally i think its a little plain, but the coding is nice, and the header is pretty cool. i just dont think the baby blue goes well with the silver/gold.
Banjo
Thanks, urm ignore the background colour i couldn't be bothered to find a good colour so i just took one out of a different css file and used that.
uncled1023
oh, ok. then the colors go well together, the gold and silver.
wozzym
yes its just a tad plain. But the overall layout of it is good smile.gif
Banjo
Thanks, any suggestions on how to make it un plain. Im already going to different themes (Colours for it) and the content area will be more interesting. This is just like a shell for the layout.
wozzym
id suggest adding more of a graphicy look and more shadows to make it look more 3d
Banjo
Ok, ill add a drop shadow to the layout later and change the background colour.
wozzym
maybe add a background image? it might look better. like a gradient or small tiles usually looks good. smile.gif
Paranoid
QUOTE(wozzym @ Mar 22 2008, 06:55 PM) *
maybe add a background image? it might look better. like a gradient or small tiles usually looks good. smile.gif

Yes - add those things.
Also, texture it up a bit...make it layered, for the sleek dimensional look (I totally made 'sleek dimensional' up, haha, but you know what I mean).
On top of everything else; make the layout 'your own'. Add your style and flare, make it reflect you.
Cmain
I think this layout could work quite well if a few things were fixed. I decent pattern background would look nice in my opinion, maybe something darker. I would also use rounded corners on this layout, maybe with a light drop shadow and lighter stroke. The text on the header also needs redone to something that blends better and is sleeker. I would also change the fonts anywhere you used a serif one. I also think some gradient rounded corner rollovers for the main navigation would look nice.
Banjo
So some stuff to do is...
  • Make a good background
  • Rounded corners
  • Change Fonts
  • Drop Shadow
  • Have different colours
  • New Header
  • Edit: And spice up the content area a bit. (Will be easier when i put content there)
Any suggestions on header design and background like stripped pattern or something.

Thanks for comments.
wozzym
i think that sums up everything wink.gif
Banjo
Hi, sorry for updating a old topic but i thought it would be silly to make a new one.

Anyway, iv kind of update my old layout

Heres the new one

Iv only changed the colour's of it and made the header a smaller height.

Also don't worry about the header i couldn't think of a design so i got got a brush and made a big blob on the canvas just to fil a hole.

Im going to add a drop shadow, rounded corners, good background, good header.


I would just like a bit of feedback on the colours (are they better) and maybe if anyone could give me a link to a site where i can learn how to do good headers and backgrounds, as i can't seem to find one.

Thanks
machine
This looks a bit too 'serious' for a fun/school site, if you ask me...
Banjo
QUOTE(machine @ Apr 9 2008, 05:33 PM) *
This looks a bit too 'serious' for a fun/school site, if you ask me...


Its not going to be one of those sites.
wozzym
i like it smile.gif
Jetteh22
very, very nice smile.gif The 2nd is much better than the first, though I really liked the simplicity of the first one too.

Ugh - getting so jealous reviewing peoples good websites when I can't make on like taht.. I'm gonna have to REALLY try one day. lol
uncled1023
very nice... headers a little plain, but good!
Banjo
QUOTE(uncled1023 @ Apr 12 2008, 12:13 AM) *
very nice... headers a little plain, but good!


QUOTE(Banjo @ Apr 9 2008, 04:40 PM) *
Also don't worry about the header i couldn't think of a design so i got got a brush and made a big blob on the canvas just to fil a hole.


Thanks for comments, oh and Creactive Online you site is pretty snazzy i like the header.
uncled1023
lol, sorry banjo, didnt read that! very nice layout!
Jetteh22
Eh, Banjo - I like it too but I didnt make it tongue.gif Somebody else did, I just paid them for it.
Sometimes thats the easiest way.
Hurricane
looks nice, very good coding, but i could say the graphics be better, but that comes with time in photoshop
Banjo
1) Was my first coded layout, obviously the graphics aren't that good.
2) Stop bumping OLD topics, look at the dates.

Also I could code it better now, that was a long time ago.

Thanks
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