Banjo
Mar 22 2008, 09:57 PM
Hi, iv just finished my first propper coded layout and i was wondering if you would mind writing some feedback about it like how i can improve it.
I may put a theme change on there later so you can change colours etc...
Anyway here is the
LayoutThanks
Edit: Updated link
http://schoolrebel.zzl.org/update/index.html
uncled1023
Mar 22 2008, 10:16 PM
hm... personally i think its a little plain, but the coding is nice, and the header is pretty cool. i just dont think the baby blue goes well with the silver/gold.
Banjo
Mar 22 2008, 10:19 PM
Thanks, urm ignore the background colour i couldn't be bothered to find a good colour so i just took one out of a different css file and used that.
uncled1023
Mar 22 2008, 10:21 PM
oh, ok. then the colors go well together, the gold and silver.
wozzym
Mar 22 2008, 11:53 PM
yes its just a tad plain. But the overall
layout of it is good
Banjo
Mar 23 2008, 12:15 AM
Thanks, any suggestions on how to make it un plain. Im already going to different themes (Colours for it) and the content area will be more interesting. This is just like a shell for the layout.
wozzym
Mar 23 2008, 12:15 AM
id suggest adding more of a graphicy look and more shadows to make it look more 3d
Banjo
Mar 23 2008, 12:24 AM
Ok, ill add a drop shadow to the layout later and change the background colour.
wozzym
Mar 23 2008, 12:55 AM
maybe add a background image? it might look better. like a gradient or small tiles usually looks good.
Paranoid
Mar 23 2008, 07:16 AM
QUOTE(wozzym @ Mar 22 2008, 06:55 PM)

maybe add a background image? it might look better. like a gradient or small tiles usually looks good.

Yes - add those things.
Also, texture it up a bit...make it layered, for the sleek dimensional look (I totally made 'sleek dimensional' up, haha, but you know what I mean).
On top of everything else; make the layout 'your own'. Add your style and flare, make it reflect you.
Cmain
Mar 23 2008, 11:34 AM
I think this layout could work quite well if a few things were fixed. I decent pattern background would look nice in my opinion, maybe something darker. I would also use rounded corners on this layout, maybe with a light drop shadow and lighter stroke. The text on the header also needs redone to something that blends better and is sleeker. I would also change the fonts anywhere you used a serif one. I also think some gradient rounded corner rollovers for the main navigation would look nice.
Banjo
Mar 23 2008, 12:30 PM
So some stuff to do is...
- Make a good background
- Rounded corners
- Change Fonts
- Drop Shadow
- Have different colours
- New Header
- Edit: And spice up the content area a bit. (Will be easier when i put content there)
Any suggestions on header design and background like stripped pattern or something.
Thanks for comments.
wozzym
Mar 23 2008, 03:21 PM
i think that sums up everything
Banjo
Apr 9 2008, 04:40 PM
Hi, sorry for updating a old topic but i thought it would be silly to make a new one.
Anyway, iv kind of update my
old layoutHeres
the new oneIv only changed the colour's of it and made the header a smaller height.
Also don't worry about the header i couldn't think of a design so i got got a brush and made a big blob on the canvas just to fil a hole.
Im going to add a drop shadow, rounded corners, good background, good header.
I would just like a bit of feedback on the colours (are they better) and maybe if anyone could give me a link to a site where i can learn how to do good headers and backgrounds, as i can't seem to find one.
Thanks
machine
Apr 9 2008, 05:33 PM
This looks a bit too 'serious' for a fun/school site, if you ask me...
Banjo
Apr 9 2008, 06:16 PM
QUOTE(machine @ Apr 9 2008, 05:33 PM)

This looks a bit too 'serious' for a fun/school site, if you ask me...
Its not going to be one of those sites.
wozzym
Apr 10 2008, 01:45 PM
i like it
Jetteh22
Apr 11 2008, 11:54 PM
very, very nice

The 2nd is much better than the first, though I really liked the simplicity of the first one too.
Ugh - getting so jealous reviewing peoples good websites when I can't make on like taht.. I'm gonna have to REALLY try one day. lol
uncled1023
Apr 12 2008, 12:13 AM
very nice... headers a little plain, but good!
Banjo
Apr 12 2008, 04:56 PM
QUOTE(uncled1023 @ Apr 12 2008, 12:13 AM)

very nice... headers a little plain, but good!
QUOTE(Banjo @ Apr 9 2008, 04:40 PM)

Also don't worry about the header i couldn't think of a design so i got got a brush and made a big blob on the canvas just to fil a hole.
Thanks for comments, oh and Creactive Online you site is pretty snazzy i like the header.
uncled1023
Apr 12 2008, 05:55 PM
lol, sorry banjo, didnt read that! very nice layout!
Jetteh22
Apr 12 2008, 06:00 PM
Eh, Banjo - I like it too but I didnt make it

Somebody else did, I just paid them for it.
Sometimes thats the easiest way.
Hurricane
May 12 2009, 07:00 PM
looks nice, very good coding, but i could say the graphics be better, but that comes with time in photoshop
Banjo
May 12 2009, 08:07 PM
1) Was my first coded layout, obviously the graphics aren't that good.
2) Stop bumping OLD topics, look at the dates.
Also I could code it better now, that was a long time ago.
Thanks
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